Better not that it wasn't great in the first place but as I saw you asked for a constructive critique I thought it wouldn't be good just to praise the work and say nothing that might improve it in my opinion
I love photographs that make you second guess your first impression of it; my first thought was, it's an eye; then secondly a spider, then I saw the two eyes in between and realised it was a sort of 'demonic creature' exiting the body through the eyes.
This is freaking awesome! The only thing that i see needs some change is the fingers on the very right, maybe bring them up a bit, they look like they are attached to the eye and be careful when erasing some of the picture it looks like the finger on the very left bottom isn't attached to anything unless that's how it is supposed to be. 0wo I hope that helped a bit and didn't sound mean. This is so cool and I wish you luck on the contest.